Kill For Me v1.0

It's a quest I'm starting. It's named Kill For Me. Pretty much when I get farther it'll be kinda like the DB hopefully, but right now I'm just starting making quests and I was hoping some people could rate what I have so far.
This is currently in the version of testing and voting, and is not even close to being finished. I'm just waiting for some responses then I shall continue with the quest. It's a quest I'm starting. It's named Kill For Me. Pretty much when I get fa