Bonadan asteroid storm

The space dock in the middle and the asteroid field (the remains of a planet after a tangle with the Death Star) do give you the feeling that the planet is getting hit with a massive asteroid storm. There are the remains of ships among the asteroids making it appear as though they were caught unaware. The placement of asteroid clusters is done well creating a choke point in the middle near 3 mines that will make for the main point of contention. A land map to accompany this with the appearance of asteroids falling from the sky seems to be in order. the_stag
It's hard to make space maps. It's near impossible to make a great space map. There's only so much you have to work with. That being said, the author did a nice job with what he had to work with.