Maelstrom

two of them in a odd shuriken-esque shape, and some macabre touches to the face, packaged together with Marka Ragnos sounds. I'm just going to be blunt: I'm not impressed. The skin I'm seeing here and the alleged character presented in the readme just clashes. This guy is supposed to be a guy who murders anyone he lays eyes on? That's all well and good, but wouldn't he be like..practically [i]DRENCHED[/i] in blood, at this point? I mean, he looks old enough to have killed enough people, and you did say he never washed his clothes >_> Secondly, did this guy just basically make people bleed to death with paper cuts or something? The blood spats here are tiny and have no real rhyme or reason. How in the world did he get blood on his back? I can think of a few theories as to why but most would end up having to digress to that whole drenched factor... One final factor to mention that I would suggest taking into consideration: dry that blood up. The blood spats that you have on him are way too fresh, and seeing as doing laundry is an irrelevant subject to him, that blood has to dry up sometime. Look up examples of dried blood
Yet another mindless mass murderer sociopath character @_@ Well =_o gaze and behold, as Racto is basically transformed into a greyscale zombie-like character with tiny fresh bloodspats on him,